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Forgive me, Master, for I have sinned.
It has been too long(solong) since
you pulled my last confession from my (bruiséd)lips.
O sin, o lust, their tempting whispers
haunt my (soul)frenzied dreams,
leaving me to wake with (sticky)sweat-stained sheets.

Bless me(takeme), Master, for I have sinned(sosweetly).
I beg for bloody absolution at your feet.
Please(pleasepleaseplease) scour my soul(withpain)
and gift your(yoursyoursyours) humble servant
with promises(ofpain) you'll keep.

Take me(forgiveme), Master, for I have sinned(foryou).
I seek (you)contrition on my knees.
Bring me (screaming)to your altar and
throw me down, make me (ohso)complete.

Forgive me, Master, for I (always)have sinned.
I throw my(heartmindbodysoul)self upon your (body)mercy
and beg (shamelessly)for you to pull (agonizing)prayers
from my (bloody)lips.

By your love, I am once more made Holy.
©2007-2009 *FallenAngelEyes
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Author's Comments

So I'm staring at this comments box trying to figure out how to explain this. I'll try to put this simply, though it'll still sound slightly odd maybe but I don't care.

I started playing City of Heroes a few months ago pretty intensively on a big RP server. My main character, Cry of Muninn, met someone else's character, Ahriman, and they ended up falling for each other and Cry rather blossomed into her own person in my head. Other people who RP probably know what this is like.

They love each other, deeply, intensely, sometimes beyond my ability to even be able to parse, definitely beyond my ability to properly communicate in this text box. He is her Master and she is his willing slave. She wanted to write a poem for him, so she/I/we did, and this is the result.

Some background: She is a fallen angel, and he is a lycanthropic demon. We wrote this poem to be in the form of a sort of prayer from her to him, slave to master, love to love.

So this is from Shade to her Ahri, her Ezekiel. :heart:

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:iconfaithlessblade:
Devious thoughts indeed.. We love you both, we love how perfectly you described it, dear. As time goes on, we hope to never do anything to make you regret your choices or shade regret hers.

Love,
Your Izzy and your Zeke
:iconwom-bat:
All I'm going to say is well done and oh my ^.^;
:iconone-relic:
I would have never guessed that you would make a character who's a Fallen Angel... haha.

Great play on the typical form of a prayer. As I read it the first time, I was literally thinking to myself, "What the fuck..." but when I went back and read it again, it all made sense and seemed to click in my head. Very well thought out indeed.

And on top of that, it's great to see you post something again, as it's been far too long since we've been able to talk!

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"Here we are trapped in the amber of the moment, there is no why." - Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
:iconimmortalityofemopoet:
that is so unique and astounding! amazing imaginary that is so vivid

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:iconfallenangeleyes:
Thanks so much for the comment and the :+fav:! And yay, another Kushiel fan :)

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.-~*The Pain in Pleasure often becomes our Pleasure of Pain*~-.
:iconfallenangeleyes:
She actually wasn't originally planned that way, but it turned out that way, hehe. And thanks for the comment, I feel kinda proud that I made you go "wtf"

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You're welcome :D and Love As Thou Wilt! ;)

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