rushing running fleeing flying
have to have to have to get away
where to go what to do
don't know what to say
why why why why
can't escape escape
must go must go
fly fly fly fly
have to fly
no other way to go
no other way to go
have to have to
going now going going going
where who what why
all I want to do is cry
must go must fly
running running running
closer closer to the edge
closer closer
going going running going
closer to the edge
jumping
flying
flying flying flying
free
I'm free free free
an illusion
as I start to fall
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This is a free verse kind of stream-of-thought poem. Placed again in General for lack of appropriate category. Another written in the same session. The most important part about it is the tempo of the piece, at least to me. There's just a lot of pure and raw emotion in it. The speed of the thought, the buildup, the sudden climax and lack of dénouement all add to the flavor of the entire thing. My mind actually sounds like this sometimes when I'm in a bad place. It's unfun.
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