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What I miss about you when your body's gone from mine
The softness of your lips, like newly fallen gossamer rose petals
The aroma of your skin, sweaty and sweet, laced with the scent of our love
Your tantalizing caresses, and the way I can feel your longing through the gentle pressure of your fingertips
The way my hand fits perfectly in the small of your back, letting me pull you ever closer into my arms
Running my fingers through your silky hair, letting it tumble in waves around me
The little moans you make, so quiet, nearly silent, though your pleasure itself is deafening
The way you move your body against mine, and how we fit together so perfectly
How I've known you so many times and each time I love you even more
The joy I feel because I know we will have so much more together.
©2006-2009 *FallenAngelEyes
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This was written about 4 years ago, during Calculus actually. It's fairly self-explanatory. One note is that when I wrote it, I was writing it about a woman at the time, hence the note about the waves of hair. However, I think it works just as well for a boy with long hair, or even a girl with cutely cut, dark, short hair. Because I say so.

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:iconmystic-rain-484:
That's really beautiful. I love the line "The little moans you make, so quiet, nearly silent, though your pleasure itself is deafening" - really great use of language and images.

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"Smile, release."
:iconfallenangeleyes:
:heart: ^-^

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.-~*The Pain in Pleasure often becomes our Pleasure of Pain*~-.
:iconfallenangeleyes:
Thank you so much for the fave :)

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.-~*The Pain in Pleasure often becomes our Pleasure of Pain*~-.
:iconfallenangeleyes:
Thank you so much for the compliments and the fave :) I'm a fan of subtle eroticism.

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.-~*The Pain in Pleasure often becomes our Pleasure of Pain*~-.
:icontalas:
Long purple hair, perhaps? ;)
:iconfallenangeleyes:
I posted this way back on OpenTome iirc. And hehe.

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.-~*The Pain in Pleasure often becomes our Pleasure of Pain*~-.

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